Monday, March 22, 2010

Blog 4: Reflection

I have to say the my experience in this class for the past 2 weeks has been unexplainable. I disliked English a whole lot but since I came into this class and I created the blog I have to say I wish all English classes where like this. Plus I also like the topic we are working on the supernatural it is one of my favorite things to talk about. I am definitely looking forward to doing more blogs. I also learned that poems can be very very long. Even though the poem "Goblins Market" was long I really like the poem.

Monday, March 15, 2010

Blog 3: Tone and symbolism

The poem I found interesting to me is called Drink My Love by an anonymous author. I read threw a lot of poems but this one just caught my attention. This poem is a pretty deep poem. It haves different tones. It also has some symbols.

What is tone? Well, tone is a sound. In literature tone is the what something sounds like and how something makes you feel. Like some tones might make you feel sad or worry. In the poem I read there are different tones at different parts of the poem. In the first part of the poem you get a feeling of her trying to give her all to the vampire. The example would be when it say "allow my blood to impower thee". Another tone the you get is of love. She loves the vampire so much she wants home to turn her into a vampire. An example of this tone would be "Drink So I could live an eternal life Forever with you".

What is symbolism? Symbolism is using a word to represent something with out write out a whole phrase. Like for instants use the word sky to represent be free or eternity. In this poem Drink My love the one big symbol is blood. Blood in this poem symbolise life. It also is like power. Not only that but everyone knows that blood is a vampires lifeline. Another symbol in this poem would be drink. you my get the picture of just someone drinking something but in this poem its more then just drink something. The word drink in this poem the way its being used is that she is offering her self to her love and she is tell him to feast upon her.

To wrap this up the poem is good poem. Even though it does have a few mistakes in it overall I really like the tones and symbols of this poem. This poem doesn't really talk about life in genreal. It does talk about love even though in the poem it is talking about a human and a vampire in reality humans act the same way when they are in love. They give there all to that one person. They might not be saying drink my blood, but people usally would say something like ill give my life up for you or i will take a bullet for you. So I guess it doesnt matter if you are a vampire and a human couple or a just a human couple love makes you do crazy things.

Thursday, March 11, 2010

Blog 2: Drink my Love (Vampire Poem)

Well I choose the topic of Vampires because I love them ever since I can remember. From the movie of Vampire in Brooklyn to Interview With the Vampire or Underworld. I also like love poems so I tried to combine them and find a vampire love poem so thats exactly what I searched on Google.com. This is just one of the poems I liked:

Drink my Love

Yes Love.
Dig your fangs in my neck so deep.
Savor the taste.
Suck and Drink
Allow my blood to impower thee
Awaken the beast hidden inside of me
Drink my love
For you have been weak
I wish to be the aid
-The Queen
To my Vampire King
Drink
Savor
Swallow
Empty my body of the human blood rein
Fill me with your venom
So I could too,
Know the vampire ways
Yes drink my love
Drink
So I could live an eternal life
Forever with you
as your Vampire Wife
Bite
Drink
Endore the taste
Embrace my body
Wrap your arms around my waist
I have fully transformed.
I feel the change
I feel the coldness in my veins
I feel my teeth razor sharp.
No longer blunt.
Come my love.
Let us hunt.
For I sense a craving
A craving for blood.
Let us drink
My Vampire Love

Its is from this website http://vampirelovepoems.blogspot.com. There are more then one poem on this site but this is the one I liked the best. This poems seems to be about a female who is in love with a vampire and would like to become whole with him. She wants to wants him to feed off her so she too can become immortal and she can can go feast on blood too.

Monday, March 8, 2010

Blog 1: About Me

Hey my name is Carmen. I am a 19 year old college student at LAGCC. I have a son who is 2 years old. He will be 3 in August. I am a Full time student, Full time mom and a part time cashier. I have a wonderful boyfriend. My favorite thing to do is play The Sims 3 I am addicted to it. Well that's it for now. To Be Continued.....